Paper 3 Draft 1 Reviews

Chloe Paper 3 Edits

Corryn Paper 3 Review

Dan Paper 3 Edits

 

Paper 2 Draft 1 Reviews

Paper 1 Draft 1 Reviews

 

My edits on Prakash’s work:

 

 

My edits on Christina’s work:

My edits on Scott’s work:

Notes on what I suggested to each person during discussion: